To My Fellow Writers:


What’s another damn blogger doing around here anyway? Well, I’ll tell you. I’m a former New York City book editor and I have a lot of tips of the trade, including juicy, behind-the-scenes glimpses into the industry and plain old writing suggestions. But wait, there’s more! I’m also a struggling writer, just like you. I recently completed my first novel. Yep, I’m putting it out there, folks. After fifteen years of editing other writers’ works, I’m going to be the punching bag.

So join me as I help you self-edit, get published, and maintain positivity in the face of a daunting industry. And please help me, soon to be awash in the maelstrom of the submission process, stay sane as I join your writing community.

More about me: I worked at HarperCollins Publishers and Thomas Dunne Books, a division of St. Martin’s Press. As I climbed the ladder, I edited mysteries, memoir, romance, women’s fiction, thrillers, true crime, cozies, non-fiction, literary . . . you name it. Except for fantasy and sci-fi, I’d seen it all. And in my current incarnation as a freelance editor (–shameless plug), I think I’ve hit every genre out there. YA has even popped up regularly on my client list.

I’m also a married mom of two young boys who never stop. Sometimes I find myself holding a manuscript in one hand while cooking dinner with the other. Okay, that’s a lie, I don’t cook. But I press microwave buttons like a pro. I live in Texas and can eat my weight in BBQ and Tex Mex, and that ain’t no lie.

And about my book? Well, you’ll have to wait and read more about it. This is only my first post after all! Give me time, people, sheesh.

Now, let’s do this first blog up with submission tips! Below are some thoughts on a topic that I feel writers fret about all the time:

The Query Letter and the Synopsis—What Makes Them Effective (and Why Writers Hate Them!)

I attended the PNWA Writers Conference as one of the official “book doctors,” and the one common denominator that each author remarked on was how much they hated writing their synopsis. (By the way, a good time was had by all at the conference. And most importantly, the continental breakfast served every morning at the conference center was ­deeeee-lish!) We didn’t even get into the query letter, but most clients I work with moan and groan about that one too. I’ve mentioned the basics of the query letter before, but considering the ire and angst this letter and the synopsis often bring, I felt it was a topic worth revisiting in more detail.

As everyone who is serious about getting published knows, the query letter can make or break you. Is this fair? No. Is it reality? Yes. I have probably read thousands of query letters and synopses over the years (OK, some of the synopses I just skimmed as my eyes would glaze over after the fifth single-spaced page. More on that later.). Therefore, I feel that I am an authority on the basics. So here they are:

Query: Begin with a succinct sell line describing the novel. A hook line, if you will. Then give the title, word count, genre (literary, memoir, historical adventure, suspense novel, vampire sci-fi Scottish romance). After that, give a paragraph or two (short!) about the plot and then wrap it up. Give a sense of tone and character, as appropriate. End with a paragraph detailing your education, your profession (But only if it improves your platform. In other words, include the fact that you’re an attorney if you’ve written a legal thriller, but there’s no need to mention that you’ve stocked shelves at Wal-Mart for ten years. Not that there’s anything wrong with this, but it doesn’t bolster your platform unless you’ve written a non-fiction, whistle-blowing account of the horrors of Wal-Mart’s flogging of employees.), and related, past writing experience. Do not tell the agent that you have fifteen other completed manuscripts sitting on your shelf. This does not show you are dedicated to the craft, it screams, “I can’t sell a novel!”

And remember, you are selling your novel in the query letter. So you want to give an overview, not every single plot point. But on the other hand, you don’t want to be so vague that you only have lines such as, “This novel of love and loss follows one woman as she confronts her demons, memories, and a past she cannot escape.” This says nothing specific and could be the query letter for hundreds of books. Most importantly, you want your book to sound unique, different (have a hook), and most importantly, saleable! Think of the letter as a persuasive advertisement for your novel and for you, the author. End the letter by letting the agent know that the full manuscript is available and thanking them for their time and consideration.

In addition, I always recommend doing research on writing query letters. If you simply whip one out in a few minutes with a smug grin on your face, knowing that your novel is so fantastic that someone would be crazy not to read it and a query letter is just a formality—you know who you are, Mr. or Mrs. Know-It-All—you will inevitably blow it with agents. If an agent (or editor) isn’t intrigued by the letter, he or she will not read one single word of your life’s work. No matter how good the manuscript is, an agent will not turn to page one if the query letter doesn’t speak to them. Period. Agents and editors are simply too busy. So do your research and make it count. Edit, revise, get opinions, and then send it out. And don’t forget to spell check and address your query to the right person—you don’t want to send your memoir to an agent who specializes in historical paranormals…unless you really are a time traveling Irish fairy.

Now then, the synopsis: the bane of an author’s existence. Yes, they are hard to write and keep to one page (Sometimes, agents allow two pages. I recommend having both versions.). Yes, one page! How can I possibly condense my incredible novel into one page? Too much happens! It’s too brilliant to explain in only a few lines. Perhaps if I could schedule a thirty-minute presentation in person with the agent, I could properly describe the opus. Trust me, I know how hard it is. I wrote jacket copy for almost ten years.

Remember that a synopsis is essential so that an agent can know the full plot without having to read all four hundred pages. So you must learn how to break your book down. It’s good practice for pitches at conferences as well. The most important thing to remember is that in a synopsis, you are not selling your book—that’s what the query letter is for. The synopsis is a plot breakdown with details. Details. Did I say details? Details! You’re describing the book scene-by-scene. OK, scene-by-important-scene. You don’t need to include the going to the bathroom, walking down the street, thinking about life scenes. Focus on the “moving the book along” plot points. Name characters, include action, and always tell how it ends. There’s nothing more frustrating than reading a detailed synopsis, only to have the author end with the line, “And finally, the main character discovers the secret to the mystery and who the murderer is.” Aaarghhhh…was it Colonel Mustard with the wrench in the library or Professor Plum with the rope in the kitchen? I must know!

To summarize—as in a query letter, not a synopsis—you are selling the book in the letter. Give the pertinent plot details, of course, but also include a powerful, succinct overview and sell line. The synopsis is comprised of specific, scene-by-scene plot points. The synopsis is not an overview—it’s all about the details. Yes, creating these two items can be very challenging, but as Charles Caleb Colton, the oft-quoted English writer, said, “To write what is worth publishing, to find honest people to publish it, and get sensible people to read it, are the three great difficulties in being an author.”

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  • Lori Avocato says:

    Wonderful advice from a wonderful editor! I know because Erin was my editor for my mystery series when she was at HarperCollins and I learned s lot from her!

  • tenalaing says:

    I’m wildly curious to read your novel, Erin, after having you read so much of mine :)
    Your blog is off to an excellent start, and I will look forward to regular posts.

  • Great advice, Erin. I learned so much from your editing style. Even though I decided not to publish The Blood Ringer, it’s still dear to my heart.
    Btw, maybe it’s on the iPad version, but could you add the share buttons to make it easier to tweet or paste on facebook. I run the page Writers Anonymous and will share your article there.

    • erinediting says:

      Thanks so much for following! I will definitely look into the share button issue. I’m still tinkering with everything around here.

      Although you’ve set aside (for now) The Blood Ringer, I hope that you’re actively working on another manuscript. You’re such a fabulous storyteller!

  • Great blog, Erin. I’m so glad you are sharing this way. You are such a gifted editor. Thanks so much for all the really tuned-in and sensitive help you gave me on my novel. I can hardly wait to read yours.

    • erinediting says:

      Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words :) It was such a fun experience working with you too, and I’m so glad you found it helpful. I’ll be blogging all about the submission process as I send out my novel, so stay tuned…

  • Pam Murray says:

    I wish you all the success in the world with your book! And of course, like everyone else, I can’t wait to read it. You’re so talented and your constructive feedback has really inspired me to push forward with Choose Happy. So right at this moment I couldn’t be more thrilled to know that I’ll have your insights through the submission process. Perfect timing!

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